From speaking, talking, and also writing, MSU program has took a big toll on me from high school. In high school, I had gotten away with so many wrong english areas, speech, and many mechanics that i use when i talk to my friends. Sadly my teachers accepted my ways, In college it is a different ball game. I appreciate Mrs.Brooks, and Mrs.dechart for taking the time out for helping me as to growing me into a "college student". In, they had a close realtionship with us but in college there are many of students and only one teacher. So therefore, it makes the students very hard to bond with a teacher and also make a good relationship with them. Although my teachers care about us but at the end of the day, we are paying them and in high school we wrent. College teachers take it very serious so it is very understandable why theyre so hard on us to make sure we are prepared in the fall. In the fall, our comp 1 class or intermediate class will be way harder than our summer developemental classes that we are currently enrolled in now. As far my speech go, My teacher Ms.Dechart is constantly on my as to my speech to get my at a level that i am desired to be on. This is a big transition because of the maturity and the seriousness of the teachers because this is theyre jobs and we as students are paying to further our education. In conclusion, I am so thankful for this program because itll give me guidance and a better understandment or advantage than other freshman that will appear in August
I'm glad you agree that my being demanding in the classroom is because I care and want you to do the best you can this summer. Your comparison of your experience now to your experience in high school is a good choice because it gives the reader a connection to you and your story. Remember the organizational stragety (diamond pattern), though. This response feels a little unorganized, and I have a hard time following your discussion of reading, writing, and thinking (from the prompt). Remember to write an outline and organize your thoughts and examples before you start to write, so you cover everything you need to and keep the reader engaged. --Mrs. Dechert
ReplyDeleteWhats good my boy I read your blog and I see that we have alot of things alike becaues when I was in high school my teachers let me got away with alot of wrong things to they really aint care bout the way we use to talk long as we did your work they were happy $JOHNNY MOORE$
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